问题描述:
关于两个定语从句修饰一个名词,求专业老师回答
Actually,the demand for fresh water in industry and agriculture is several times greater than we may initially assume,to say nothing of the side effects that extensive economy brings to our life,which have generated a significant loss of our precious water resources.
这里several times greater than用得对不对,总感觉有些别扭,因为great demand是可以的,就.还是把greater去掉?还是怎么改这个比较级?
这里side effects我用了两个定语从句来修饰,which那个对不对,或曰语法错误,是逗号的原因,还是连接的问题,怎样改更流畅呢?都是限制性定语从句.
brings的s去掉,
Actually,the demand for fresh water in industry and agriculture is several times greater than we may initially assume,to say nothing of the side effects that extensive economy brings to our life,which have generated a significant loss of our precious water resources.
这里several times greater than用得对不对,总感觉有些别扭,因为great demand是可以的,就.还是把greater去掉?还是怎么改这个比较级?
这里side effects我用了两个定语从句来修饰,which那个对不对,或曰语法错误,是逗号的原因,还是连接的问题,怎样改更流畅呢?都是限制性定语从句.
brings的s去掉,
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