求一篇英语作文~高中水平,各项错误要低于5个!拜托了~~

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求一篇英语作文~高中水平,各项错误要低于5个!拜托了~~
假如你是李华,住在北京市南城.你的澳大利亚笔友Bob来信谈到他的居住地情况,并希望了解你所居住地的情况,请你用英语写一封回信.回信必须包括以下内容:
自然情况:
1.位于北京南城,毗邻古老的天坛公园(北京的象征),风景优美,适合居住
成就:
2.经济发展迅速
3.修建了不少商场、住房、街道等
存在的问题:
4.噪音、空气污染
5.交通拥挤
对本区发展的看法:
自己拟定
注意:1.词数在100左右,信的开头已经给出
2.短文要包括以上所有要点
参考词汇:
经济economy(n.) 象征symbol(n.)
Dear Bob,
It's very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful town.Now I'dlike to tell you something about my district.
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1个回答 分类:英语 2014-09-21

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Dear Bob,
It's very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful town.Now I'dlike to tell you something about my district.
I'm living in a wonderful place,it located on the south of Beijing,next to the ancient Temple of Heaven .It is an ideal place to live and it's also the symbol of Beijing.
Let me tell you something about my hometown.It has a vast amount of change in few years.The economy has been developing fast and has built many stores,builds and streets.
Therefore ,it also has many problems.such as air pollution,voice pollution,busy traffic ,etc.
In my opinion,in order to build my hometown more beautiful,we should tackle the environment problems and promote moral progress ,I believe we can create a new future.
Sincerely LiHua
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