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Suggestion
Dear maneger,
I'd like to suggest you to renew the play field in the wineshop.It is worthful in three reasons.First of all,the kindergarten can raise money for our wineshop.Second,many guests chose the wineshop to have a nice dream because of the kindergarten as the students in the kindergarten are not just a few.
Last,the kindergarten provides buses that go through three wineshop which give us a lot of advantages.
Thank you very much