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这里有一篇英语文章,希望大家能帮忙改一下语法错误
(一)On the road I met a man who is both familiar and strange to me. It was indeed a surprise to me. After a brief chat I realised that man was myself in twenty years.
I told him my life objective was to create my name and establish my reputation. He said you have been successful in achieving the target as you have been a successful doctor who saves others' life. I told him that I was miserably feeling that I was still far from that and it seemed to me what I wanted to achieve was full of uncertainty and the way to it was full of hurdles and difficulties.
" Don't worry too much. Hardworking would result in success. You future is clear as I was you in certain years" I suddenly understood what he meat. Just then he disappeared and I had to take my own way forward.
Such an unexpected meeting with the man has almost changed my life. Since then I have become very determined and never worried about difficulties in front of me. I am confidently working hard for my bright tomorrow.
By ztlthb.

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中文意思要不要也给你们?
在路边,迎面走来一位既陌生而又十分熟悉的人,令我猛地一惊的是,他长得和我出奇的像,他也很诧异。在谈话得知,他便是二十年后的我。
我告诉他我的梦想是做一名一声,他很高兴地告诉我,我成功了,成功的做了一名救死扶伤的医生。我很苦恼地倾诉“梦很遥远,我现在的拼搏只是为了都一个不确定的未来,这一路困难重重,我有些迷茫和纠结。”“百炼成钢,相信你自己,未来会逐渐清晰的。因为我就是你!!”我似乎想通了,而他也说他要走了,就这样,我们又再次踏上各自的征途。
一次奇妙的邂逅,让我更加明确坚定自己的梦想,将不惧艰难,勇往直前!!!
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On the road I met a man who seemed both familiar and strange to me.It was indeed a surprise.After a brief chat I realized that he was I myself in twenty years.
I told him my life objective was to build a respectful name and establish my reputation.He said that you had been successful in achieving the target as you had been a successful doctor who saved many lives.I told him that I was miserably feeling that I was still far from that goal and it seemed to me what I wanted to achieve was full of uncertainty and the way towards it was full of hurdles and difficulties.
"Don't worry; you’ll be tempered into steel.You future is very certain as I was you in many years ago" I suddenly understood what he meant.Just then he disappeared and I had to move forward.
Such an unexpected meeting with the future me has changed my life.Since then I have become very determined and never worried about obstacles in front of me.I am confidently working hard for my bright future.
 
 
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