我的英文求职信,麻烦帮我挑错并提修改意见

楼主很强势,有少数修改意见仅供参考,探讨而已,不足为凭.
1.I learned that your company is going to employ a financial analyst,so I am writing to you because I am very interested in the position and competent to your requirements.
1,want用于无人称主语不是很好,hire不如employ更常用,competent是胜任就无需meet了,意思重复.
2.I have experience in financial investment.I have worked in a consulting firm providing financial institutions with investment advice for more than 2 years.As a consultant,I have been actively involved in various consulting projects such as market scan for investment opportunities,due diligence investigation and study on listed companies.
2,I am experienced我经历了金融投资,比较别扭,不如改为我有……的经验,如想表达经历（不是一次）,那可用复数.Provide……with……是典型的用法.用for more than 2 years就用现在完成时即可,同样表示现在还在这家咨询公司工作；如用完成进行时,那用since 200× 比较好.Due diligence加个investigation意思似乎更清楚一点.
3.I have a strong education background which shows my outstanding learning ability.I hold a master's degree in Management Science & Engineering and a bachelor's degree in Management and Information Systems both from Tsinghua University in Beijing.
3.背景加个不定冠词较好,I是第一人称,hold不应该用单数.
4.I have learned a lot of financial knowledge and passed CFA level 1 and level 2 exams in 2008 and 2009 respectively.
I would appreciate your time in reviewing my enclosed resume and if there is any additional information you require,please contact me.I would welcome an opportunity to meet with you for a personal interview.
With many thanks,