雅思写作请高手看看,给点意见

雅思写作请高手看看,给点意见
Environment benefits from tourism
People usually think that tourism always harms environment such as pollutions and rubbish and so on.
But we are also supposed to consider about the benefits which brought by tourism,there are a lot of cities or districts which have been grown richer and stronger by tourism industry in China,take an instance,everybody know Guilin,because Guilin scenery tops in the world.
Tourism can beautify environment by an indirect way.For example,tourism may attracts investment and consume ,thus improves the local economic development and boosts local living standard.And those income which is acquired by tourism can use for altering environment.As a consequence,those income and environment improvement have been form a circle which makes the tourism region more beautiful and boom.
就是一段，老师要求写一段旅游带给环境的好处。所以没有开头结尾。
写起来感觉很难受，感觉没什么可写的。