请帮我看下这篇英语作文,哪里能修改哪里能改进.谢谢!

图片大概就是一堆人围在桌子上,年青一代都拿着手机,平板之类的,爷爷奶奶都很不开心的样子

作文是:

    The picture is show that in ahome’s dinner, all the family sitting around the desk, although the has lots offood on desk, the people who is teenage all play the telephone, including thelittle boy, there are happy when they watch the screen. On the contrary, the grandfatherand grandmother are unhappy.

    I am guilt when I see this picture because sometimes,I play the telephone in the dinner, too. But it is wrong, I think. A gooddinner is family talking each other. And all the family are happy. Although thetechnologic make some good effective to our live, a coin has two sides. Some disadvantageis derive from technologic because the use is untrue. First of all, I think thetechnologic is really good for us, making our live convenience. Then, if usethe technologic untrue will lead to some bad result, biggest like the war or smallestlike the picture show. Finally, I suggest that people should ride out thevirtual when do something like make a dinner, talking about the parents is agood choose.

    All in all, in my opinion ,use the technologic true will make ourworld flowers blooming like a piece of brocade.