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麻烦帮我看一下有什么语法错误,大概还有什么地方需要改进.(是用于口语中!)
My hometown is an inland city best known for rolling hills and the confluence of the Yangtze and Jialing Rivers.I suppose the first feature I would say in my hometown is its gorgeous cityscape,especially the night scene.When I stant at the relatively high mountain,I always astonished from this view.Also,the light trails widly used in my hometown .I suppose it is a very convinent transpor tool and it can help people saved much time.Another siginificant characteristic is that the delicious food attacts a tons of tourists like the hot pot.Besides,I also believe the color in this kind of food may represents the local people of hot personality.
My hometown is an inland city best known for rolling hills and the confluence of the Yangtze and Jialing Rivers.I suppose the first feature I would say in my hometown is its gorgeous cityscape,especially the night scene.When I stant at the relatively high mountain,I always astonished from this view.Also,the light trails widly used in my hometown .I suppose it is a very convinent transpor tool and it can help people saved much time.Another siginificant characteristic is that the delicious food attacts a tons of tourists like the hot pot.Besides,I also believe the color in this kind of food may represents the local people of hot personality.
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