He is worse应改为He is lost I'm worse应改为I'm lost. Is it a long walk?改为Is it far from here?更好一些. one meters (一米?)awaly要改为one kilometer(一千米) away 至于时态,前面你都用了一般现在时了,后面也要用一般现在时吧.went to 改为goes to 再问: 再问: 还有错的吗? 再答: Third stop?改为The third stop?
ather about ten minutes改为Ten minutes later(因为after用于过去的时间) Sam is find 改为Sam finds(is不能乱用哦) 其他的,问题不大了。