帮我看看下面这段话有什么语法错误或者其它不好的,很短的

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帮我看看下面这段话有什么语法错误或者其它不好的,很短的
The day before that day,my mom,cousin and I went to a flower shop to by some flowers.one rose is 4 yuan,we bought 30 roses.
Next day morning,my cousin and I were ready for selling flowers to sweeties.we didn’t know how many they would buy,but we had confdence.
There were a lot of people on the street.most of them were sweeties.first,we helped the flowers to dressed.we put some pieces colorful paper on the branches.as far as I know,we should cut the withered petals.that made the roses more beautiful.
1个回答 分类:英语 2014-11-15

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第一行的one那个O要大写
第三行The next morning
第三行的selling flowers to sweeties说不清楚是什么意思?是以卖花赚钱去买糖吃吗?
第四行的最后一个单词应该是confidence.
第五行most的M要大写
第六行to be dressed
第六行we的W要大写
第六行pieces of colorful paper
第七行as far as的第一个as的A要大写
第七行As far as I known
第七行we had cut the withered petals,但前面用as far as来连接好像怪怪的,意思表达不清楚了.
第八行roses were more beautiful
 
 
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