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Influence of computers on us
It is true in a modern industrial society that computers have influenced on our lives and work very deeply.The picture above shows a thought-provoking phenomenon.It is a chain that links a mouse to a computer.
When talking about modern technology,such as cars and computers,we always quote an old saying:a coin has two sides-a good one that is intended and a bad one which is foreseen.On the one hand,the use of a computer helps us save much time,which can be used to do other things.On the other hand,many youngsters indulge in computers to such an extent that they lost self-control.They always stay before a computer in an internet bar several hours,sometimes one day.If lets the situation to continue,the next generation will lost the power which help them face the dramatic competition in the future.
It is high time to put some measures to improve the tendency.In my view,the effective solution to this problem depends on the effort made by government and schools.Firstly,the government ought to make a proper policy concerning setting a limit to the internet bar.Secondly,teachers in the middle school should help their students know the merit and shortcoming of web addiction.
Influence of computers on us
It is true in a modern industrial society that computers have influenced on our lives and work very deeply.The picture above shows a thought-provoking phenomenon.It is a chain that links a mouse to a computer.
When talking about modern technology,such as cars and computers,we always quote an old saying:a coin has two sides-a good one that is intended and a bad one which is foreseen.On the one hand,the use of a computer helps us save much time,which can be used to do other things.On the other hand,many youngsters indulge in computers to such an extent that they lost self-control.They always stay before a computer in an internet bar several hours,sometimes one day.If lets the situation to continue,the next generation will lost the power which help them face the dramatic competition in the future.
It is high time to put some measures to improve the tendency.In my view,the effective solution to this problem depends on the effort made by government and schools.Firstly,the government ought to make a proper policy concerning setting a limit to the internet bar.Secondly,teachers in the middle school should help their students know the merit and shortcoming of web addiction.
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