请各位英语大师帮小弟修改这篇英语作文(Stay away from Fast Food)

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请各位英语大师帮小弟修改这篇英语作文(Stay away from Fast Food)
Nowadays,more and more people Like to eat fast food.The problem of Like to eat fast food is becoming more and more serious.It is said that Fast food Very safe.Be harmful to Body.I think we will be more healthy if we Eat less fast food.
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Nowadays,more and more people like to eat fast food.However,eating fast food of all sorts of questions produced,is becoming more and more serious.People say that eating fast food is safe.To eat fast food,although very convenient,but it is not good to the body.I think,if we eat less fast food,the body will be more healthy.
如今,越来越多的人喜欢吃快餐.然而,吃快餐产生的种种问题,越来越严重.有人说吃快餐食品是安全的.吃快餐,虽然很方便,但它对身体不好.我认为,如果我们少吃快餐,身体会更健康.
这篇作文总体来说挺不错,但美中不足的是有些句子不够规范.帮你改好了,o(∩_∩)o
 
 
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