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There are many trips in my memory,Among them,I never forgot that day when my family made a trip to visit YanDang Mountain in May 1st 2005.It was a fine day that day,when we arrived at the peak of YanDang Mountain,I was charmed by the beautiful landscape and I felt that I was flying in the sky.It gave me the most impressive is not only the charmful landscape attract me,but also my mother and father could spend time making a trip with me although they were always busy.I never forget that day and that trip to YanDang Mountain with my whole family.
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I will go to the island which is the one of the most famous Buddhism tourist attractions in China this weekend.Along with some reasons I am going to start my journey.Owing to some unhappy things that happened to me several months ago,I need to take a walk to have some fresh breath,and to bury what I should forget and can`t be remembered forever.I know there is nothing like nature that can make me comfortable,so I decide to fell the beautiful things such as blue sky,boundless sea,wonderful breeze,soft beach,bright sunshine and so on… all of the things that nature can give me as well as can help me; You know,now is September,students who take part in self-learning know there will be an exam in October,I am a student of self-leaning,and I will take part in the examination next month,though I have no religious believes,the place where I will go is the Buddhism holy land,therefore,do as the Romans do,I will pray for myself,of course,I know that all the success results from hard work,so I will try to do my best for ever,I believe by means of my effort,I am sure that I will pass the exam; Since 1993,I have never taken the ship,but sea-travel has left a good impression on my mind.As the word “island” implies,it`s on the sea,the only way to get there is to take ship,certainly something to look forward to,the trip is appealing to me very much.
All my dear friends,when I go back to home,I will take pictures show you,and I will bring luck to you all.Now,it`s too late,I must go to bed,good night every one!
The trip was so wonderful that I would never forget.
We planed trip routes at our discretion.we made the most of our time to visit almost all the tourist attractions.Although the weather there was not fine,furthermore,we suffered from rain,we still enjoyed our travel,because wherever we went,the beautiful views all around us were fantastic in rainy day.
The night that we sitted on the beach was so nice,at that time we were drinking beer,listning to the music,looking at the stars,feeling the sea wind and listning to the songs of surf.when I drank up a tin of beer,I felt a little tipsy,but I liked this feeling,there were only happyness on my mind.
One morning,after ebb-tide,I picked up some shells,in fact,they were not very nice and treasure,but they contained beautiful memory,so I loved them.
Thank you my friend,thank for your company,wish the nice trip is always on our mind.