问题描述:
高手帮我批改一下作文(六级的)
a letter to a laid-off acquaintance
正文如下:
Dear Wing,
First and foremost,I must say that I'm so sorry to hear that you have been laid-off.I think you must be in no moo to do anything now.However,as I see it from my stand point,the situation is not too bad to deal with.You should remember an old saying:Where is a will,where is a way.you undoubtedly go through this tough time if you keep this faith.
Now all I can do is to give your some suggestions and hope that it will be useful for you.At the first place,I have to say it again that you must cheer up and be sonfident.At the second place,you have to find out the reason why you have been fired and correct it.For example,if your boss fired you due to your laziness,you must work harder and devote yourself to your job from now on.Finally,you can search a job on the Internet which fits you.Besides,there are also much imformation and advice about how to successed in your career.
Sincerely,I hope you can have a better job sas soon as possible.whenever you need my hand,I'll do anything I can to support you.Call me anytime you need.
Best wishes your best friend
没错的不要复制粘贴,只要改有错的,免得看得眼花~.
a letter to a laid-off acquaintance
正文如下:
Dear Wing,
First and foremost,I must say that I'm so sorry to hear that you have been laid-off.I think you must be in no moo to do anything now.However,as I see it from my stand point,the situation is not too bad to deal with.You should remember an old saying:Where is a will,where is a way.you undoubtedly go through this tough time if you keep this faith.
Now all I can do is to give your some suggestions and hope that it will be useful for you.At the first place,I have to say it again that you must cheer up and be sonfident.At the second place,you have to find out the reason why you have been fired and correct it.For example,if your boss fired you due to your laziness,you must work harder and devote yourself to your job from now on.Finally,you can search a job on the Internet which fits you.Besides,there are also much imformation and advice about how to successed in your career.
Sincerely,I hope you can have a better job sas soon as possible.whenever you need my hand,I'll do anything I can to support you.Call me anytime you need.
Best wishes your best friend
没错的不要复制粘贴,只要改有错的,免得看得眼花~.
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