In the first place,I will focus on the colors of the two sel

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In the first place, I will focus on the colors of the two self-portraits. Looking at the two self-portraits, we can find that both of the artists mainly used dark colors to convey cold feelings. The
painter of the first self-portrait used dark own to contract the man’s fair skin while the second one used two kinds of blue colors which can easily draw people’s attention to the man’s face because light blue made it extremely noticeable. In fact, contrast colors may make something more beautiful than when it is seen alone. In the first self-portrait, the background is dark enough to contract the man’s fair skin while in the second self-portrait, dark blue background and light blue face are the man’s identities which makes all of the things that go into making him. Basically, the excellent use of colors in the two self-portraits created subtle sense of being in a melancholy mood. Without using extra things but only the colors, two artists portrayed most vividly and deeply impressed people.
Athough the two works share many common points, it’s necessary to emphasize some differences between them. The more you contrast the two works, the more differences you will get from them. Actually, different techniques in painting maintained two works’different identities. First of all, in the first self-portrait, the man only showed his side face, the shadow in his brow tells us he is really in a bad mood. More importantly, his pale face with no beard on it conveys a strong cold feeling to people. Contrasting restlessness with a tranquil face in the second self-portrait,we can find that the man seems to be so peaceful since his mild eyes conveys this kind of soft feeling to us.