when i had my first success 英语作文

when i had my first success,i felt very excited,i spent lots of time
practicing singing,i tried my best to remember the lyrics and asked my music teacher to help me.we practiced the song called Sailling every afternoon.at last,i can sing the song as well as i can.then i took part in the singing contest.to begin with,i was very nervous,but later on ,i became relaxed and sang the song with a beautiful voice.at last,i became winner.that is my first success,it's so wonderful that i would not forget.
我就是初三的 但是不知道会不会有语法错误 应该还好啦 没写过这样的作文 不知道怎么样