有没有大学英语老师,帮我看看这篇六级作文能得多少分?

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有没有大学英语老师,帮我看看这篇六级作文能得多少分?
Just as a classical Arab saying goes,"where there is a smile,there is a hope".Simple as the famous remark is,its dynamic meaning is obvious as deep as ocean.Smiling,admittedly,really matters.
From my own perspective,it can be justified without any exxageration that smile is of great importance.The first and foremost,smiling is good for our interpeosonal communication.Once in a while,we can hardly say some words directly,in contrast,we can impress our meaning with a smile.There is one more point,I should touch on that smiling can comfort people who are injured and sad.The last but not least,fierce conflicts can be resolved merely with a smile.
In conclusion,smiling is of great importance.Only do we realise its significance and lay emphasis upon it can we communicate with people well.
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marvelous! You’d better pay more attention to word order.
 
 
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