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求高手修改英语六级作文
英语太烂,很不顺,呵呵,
I have a really interesting job in machuya where is in shibuya.
It is a part-time job and I work from 19:00~23:00.one week
third.What about my job?
\x05The customer buys a ticket in a machine and gives it to me.I
read the name of the cook which wrote in the ticket .other
staff cooks the cook.I provide the cook to the customer.
Because there are so much people(they play,shopping,work in here)
in shibuya .so my shop is Very busy .after job I really feel tried.but
When I work I feel happy.It is a nice job.
英语太烂,很不顺,呵呵,
I have a really interesting job in machuya where is in shibuya.
It is a part-time job and I work from 19:00~23:00.one week
third.What about my job?
\x05The customer buys a ticket in a machine and gives it to me.I
read the name of the cook which wrote in the ticket .other
staff cooks the cook.I provide the cook to the customer.
Because there are so much people(they play,shopping,work in here)
in shibuya .so my shop is Very busy .after job I really feel tried.but
When I work I feel happy.It is a nice job.
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