帮我看看这段英语自我介绍!

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帮我看看这段英语自我介绍!
帮我看下吧!看有错误没有,有的话帮我改一下!(包括大小写!)
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Hi!My name is Qin MingYu and my English name is ABBY.I'm a good girl.I'm 13 years.I likes orangs very much.I like play computer games.I have a dog,it's black and white,it neme is LaLa.I like blue.my super star is super junior.
This is me.
还有,”你想跟我做朋友吗?”用英文怎么写?
1个回答 分类:英语 2014-09-24

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Hi!
My name is Qin MingYu and my English name is ABBY.
I'm a good girl.I'm 13 years old.
I like oranges very much.I like playing computer games.
I have a dog,it's black and white,its neme is LaLa.I like blue.my super star is super junior.
This is me.
my super star is super junior.就这句话叔叔没看懂,
 
 
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