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If I should become the richest man in China,I will create The Disaster Relief Fund for my mother land.Because she is too big so often damaged by natural disaster like Sichuan Earthquake.
There are one hundred thousand people were buried alive.And so many schools' building collapsed.From TV I see pencil-boxes and schoolbags among the ruins.My tears rush out of my eyes.
The Disaster Relief Fund will out money to build school and help suffered people rebuilt their house.
The earth is too small.We need to spread the area our live.I want to organize some talented person to find a new room in space for human.
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If I should become the richest man in China,I will create The Disaster Relief Fund for my mother land.Because she is too big so often damaged by natural disaster like Sichuan Earthquake.
There are one hundred thousand people were buried alive.And so many schools' building collapsed.From TV I see pencil-boxes and schoolbags among the ruins.My tears rush out of my eyes.
The Disaster Relief Fund will out money to build school and help suffered people rebuilt their house.
The earth is too small.We need to spread the area our live.I want to organize some talented person to find a new room in space for human.
帮我改改
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