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有谁能帮我改改作文?英语的
Dear Ddebbie,
It was very kind of you to plan to adopt a homeless dog.Because animals are people' friends.We shoud protect and love them.The problem with homeless animais is more and more serious now .We shoud try our best to solve this problem,and you are doing it now.Don'worry.If you want to adopt a homeless animal,you 'll have to be responsible for it.Of course,you have to spend some time and energy to keep it.And you must know the knowledge about how to keep a pet well.Keeping a pet is hard,but it's happy ,too.I hope you could keep the dog well.
yours
Wang Dan
我只是个初三的，请勿用较生僻的单词，因为我看不懂。修改的地方请讲清楚在哪，原因是什么。
Dear Ddebbie,
It was very kind of you to plan to adopt a homeless dog.Because animals are people' friends.We shoud protect and love them.The problem with homeless animais is more and more serious now .We shoud try our best to solve this problem,and you are doing it now.Don'worry.If you want to adopt a homeless animal,you 'll have to be responsible for it.Of course,you have to spend some time and energy to keep it.And you must know the knowledge about how to keep a pet well.Keeping a pet is hard,but it's happy ,too.I hope you could keep the dog well.
yours
Wang Dan
我只是个初三的，请勿用较生僻的单词，因为我看不懂。修改的地方请讲清楚在哪，原因是什么。
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