HELP~~英语作文修改,当晚要给出答案!

Dear Bob,
Hello!I am very happy to hear from you and glad to be your friend.My name is Zhang Qiang.I am fifteen.I am Chinese and I live in Shanxi.
I am a middle school student.I like English and I good at English.Because the English teacher is so funny.I like sports.My favourite sport is table tennis.I can play it very well!You can come and watch my table tennis match!I good at drawing.I can draw many things.I can draw a picture of you,too.Ha!Ha!
I hear something about America.I can speak English very well!I hope I will visit your country one day.
Your are my forever friend!
Your sincerely
Zhang Qiang

做了点小改动,楼主参考下~分别在信内容的第一行,第四行第五行, I hear any about America.这句不知道楼主要表达什么意思,但是语法有错的~ 所以稍微修改了下~
有什么问题可以继续讨论哈~希望对你有帮助~