英语翻译1编审特别提到,这篇文章需要进一步润色.（editor,polish)2他的家人对他的职业选择感到高兴.（del

1编审特别提到,这篇文章需要进一步润色.（editor,polish)
The editor especially mentioned that this article need to be polished further.
2他的家人对他的职业选择感到高兴.（delighted,profession)
His family are delighted at his choice of profession.