翻译personal statement

In secondary school, I was interested in history, high school and matriculation,have historical subjects for the elective course, and for three consecutive years won the first, therefore in the history department.
Now I am studying in XXXX, in xxxxx, XXXXXXX courses make me to China culture has more understanding, with many outstanding literary works, provides inexhaustible supply of nutrients to the learning Chinese cultural history.
Idle time, I also often to the newspaper, to participate in the essay contest, in order to hone writing. In addition, the XXXX held a literary walk, Chinese readingand other activities, I also actively participate in, through field visits, to students and teachers to share ways, absorb a wide range of knowledge China cultural history.
My ideal is to join the culture and history of the relevant industry, the science, theapplication in society, to repay the society. The cultural and historical interestand learn in order to practise the goal of University, hope can give me a chanceto learn and study, let me have the advance opportunities in the pursuit of the ideal way.
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