求英语高手修改作文I want to Englishteacher s home and learned English

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求英语高手修改作文
I want to Englishteacher s home and learned English grammar in the morning.Although it was hot.Yet I still took notes earnest.
I come back homeafter lesson.than ,I ate too much rice and I watch the program about runningman on the telephone.
In the evening ,Ihad a nap .than I started learned English .because of I hope my english mak aswell as my classmate.
At 6 o clock,myfather with I played tennis on the playground.
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Despite the burning sun this morning, I went to my english teacher's house with notes and had a grammar lesson.
I came back home after that and had a fulfilling lunch. Also, I have catched my favourite variety show, Running man, on my mobile.
I had a quick nap after that and woke up to work on my English in the late afternoon. I hope my English is as good as the rest of the classmates.
At six o'clock, my father and I played tennis in the playground.
我英文也一般般 但希望有帮到
我改了些 语病 和 不通顺词语
外加一些单词
楼主意思大致都看得懂 就是一些小毛病 谢谢
 
 
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