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主题:我心中的成功人士.要求:1.人物简介 2.人物事迹 3.对你的启示
The successful man in my heart
Who is the successful man in my heart?sure is my friend Fandy.Shi is 14 years old,and she is good at study.She is a very friendly girl who with a long black hear,She usually help me with some trouble at my study.What a good girl!I think She is successful.She do everything perfect!I will learn from her,to help others,and try to do my best!I will study hard in order to catch her!
(PS.知道自己写得很烂.不过很想知道哪里有错误,还有那些句子可以改的更好的!)
The successful man in my heart
Who is the successful man in my heart?sure is my friend Fandy.Shi is 14 years old,and she is good at study.She is a very friendly girl who with a long black hear,She usually help me with some trouble at my study.What a good girl!I think She is successful.She do everything perfect!I will learn from her,to help others,and try to do my best!I will study hard in order to catch her!
(PS.知道自己写得很烂.不过很想知道哪里有错误,还有那些句子可以改的更好的!)
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