谁帮我看看我写的这句话语法对吗?

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谁帮我看看我写的这句话语法对吗?
A good case in point is that many college students are not equipped with the ability coping with the life and the society independently and properly.主要看ability后面需要加什么吗?大家帮我看看这句话怎么写更好些,
ability后面需要加什么which can help them之类的吗?读起来有点怪,少不少成分啊,加上了我就觉得太罗嗦。
1个回答 分类:英语 2014-10-17

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你好.比较习惯的英语表达是:

A good case in point is that many college students are not equipped with the ability to cope with life properly.

因为:
1 properly已经包含了independently.
2 life本身就已经处於society之中了,所以society应该省略.
3 the ability to do sth 是英语习惯用法.
思考一下再做决定吧,朋友.
 
 
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