Last summer ,my parents and i went camping trip.I was very e

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Last summer ,my parents and i went camping trip.I was very excited.Because this is appreciated a a
第一次写,可能不好,请大家多多指教,将错误改出来.谢谢了
Last summer ,my parents and i was went camping .I was very excited.Because this is my first time camping.we got on the train,all appreciated a lot of scenery.we arrived at a small jungle.there are many plants,they are closely.we along with instructor has found a good rest.early the next morning.we started camping."oh!you have a big tent!"a little girl said.she about 7or8years old.she cames from nanjing.she name was sea,was a pretty girl.from now on,we became good friends,she likes making more friends.camping passes quickly.i was very happly, because i made a new friend.（过去式）

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Last summer ,my parents and i （went out for a hiking）.
I was very excited（,because） this is （the first camping in my lifetime）.
（We） got on the train,all （appreciating：做说明作用的状语,且是主动句,所以改成ing词尾） a lot of scenery.（或者：...train,and all appreciated a lot of...）
（Finally：加上一个时间状语“终于”表示时间发展顺序比较好）,we arrived at a （woods）.（woods是树林,比较小的；jungle是原始热带丛林的意思啊～）
There （were）many plants,（which）（were）（close to us）.
Along with （the）instructor,we （had） a （really）good rest.
The next day,early （in）the morning,our camping (started).
"Oh!You have a big tent!"a little girl said (to me).
She (was) about 7 or 8 years old.
She (said that she) (came) from Nanjing(,and that) she (enjoyed) making friends (with more people).
(Her) name was Sea.She was a pretty girl.
From (then) on,we became good friends.
(How time flied!) /Time passed quickly.
But I was very (happy),because I made a new friend.

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