问题描述：
看一下这句话有没有大的语法错误（大约GRE水平左右）
Though because this task was initially recongized as only a group practice and what we need was only understanding rather than mastering it,our guide teacher didn't expect us designing sth.better than the candidate of doctors' group doing,not only I grasped the technique of composing a battery and gained a stronger experience of some basic physics experiment skills but also the final result of the last several batteries,whose anode meterial were V2O5+fluoride,showed a so good performance that our guide teacher said it was good,unexpected and that she will recommended it to the candidates of doctors for their reference because this battery capacity only shows 10% below their group.
思路：尽管因为A和B,老师的行动是C.但是不仅我D而且电池E,E的结果是老师认为F,同时老师要做G.
小语法错误就忽略了,主要看看根据这个思路,结构上有没有严重的错误,如果有应该用什么思路写?
candidate of doctors-博士生,anode- 电池的正极
Though because this task was initially recongized as only a group practice and what we need was only understanding rather than mastering it,our guide teacher didn't expect us designing sth.better than the candidate of doctors' group doing,not only I grasped the technique of composing a battery and gained a stronger experience of some basic physics experiment skills but also the final result of the last several batteries,whose anode meterial were V2O5+fluoride,showed a so good performance that our guide teacher said it was good,unexpected and that she will recommended it to the candidates of doctors for their reference because this battery capacity only shows 10% below their group.
思路：尽管因为A和B,老师的行动是C.但是不仅我D而且电池E,E的结果是老师认为F,同时老师要做G.
小语法错误就忽略了,主要看看根据这个思路,结构上有没有严重的错误,如果有应该用什么思路写?
candidate of doctors-博士生,anode- 电池的正极
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