帮我看看英语作文We should learn to look after ourselves.This is very

一二句混合一下 It is important for us to learn how to look after ourselves.
.Our parents bcome elder and elder :have become
we must learn to look after ourselver :We want to learn to take good care of yourself more
I learn something important from it :From which I learned more important things.
such as how to love ourselves,how to cook food,how to clean the room and how to be responsible for others.:这个另起一句 how to be responsible for others改为How to responsible for others.
最后一句改为From this I will slowly growing among能好一些
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