修改英语作文(标点或者大小写不用了)就看看语法上面有没有错误!

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修改英语作文(标点或者大小写不用了)就看看语法上面有没有错误!
December 25th is a Christmas Day.It is an important festival in the west countries.It
likes our Spring Festival in China.People are so happy in that day.
Before christmas day,children will put the stocking beside their beds and then go to sleep.Because their parents tell them,Father Christmas will give your presents when you sleep during the Christmas Day.And he will put it into the stocking.
Usually Children will wake up early during the Christmas Day.then,they shout at the other family members"Merry Christmas!"then,children open all the present quickly,you can see many beautiful things in the presents such as red clothers,smell bear,big cars,and bags,At last all the famlily members begin begin to eat deshicious breakfast.
I think the spring Festiral is interesting,but the Christmas Day is more interesting than it.
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December 25th is (a) Christmas Day.
It is an important festival in the west(&&the west 改成western) countries.
It likes (our) Spring Festival in China.People are so happy in that day.
Before christmas day,children will put the stocking(socks,stocking是长筒袜) beside their beds and then go to sleep.
Because their parents tell them,Father Christmas(&&你想说的是圣诞老人吧?Santa Claus) will give your(改成you,宾格) presents when you sleep during(具体的日子用on比较好) the Christmas Day.
And he will put it into the stocking(socks).
Usually Children will wake up early during(on) the Christmas Day.then,they shout at(用shout to更好,shout at有敌意) the other family members"Merry Christmas!"then,children open all the present quickly,you can see many beautiful things in the presents such as red clothers(clothes),smell(small) bears,big cars,and bags,At last all the famlily members begin (begin) to eat deshicious(delicious) breakfast.
I think the spring Festiral is interesting,but the Christmas Day is more interesting than it.
顺便点评一下下.
文章的时态应该一致,找好一个时间点作为现在,然后要用现在时完成时还是将来时都好说了.
这篇文章有时候用现在时,有时候用将来时会给人很混乱的感觉.
还有人称.不管是汉语还是英语,人称一定要一致,除非你有把握能够自然地装换人称.不然的话,也会有种很乱的感觉.
 
 
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