求英语高手纠正语法错误和用词,

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求英语高手纠正语法错误和用词,
为甚么在前面我说这也在一定程度上影响了我的人生观呢,因为我想到了我生活中有过的一些“小事情”,我也相信每个人都可以讲出一个对自己重要的“小事情”,其实我就经常纠结于这样的一些小事情:如果我晚出门十分钟,今天会不一样吗?如果我没赶上这趟地铁,我又会遇到什么事呢?如果我没有看过这部影片,我的人生观又会有什么改变吗?如果我没有无意中打开那个网友的影评,我的论文题目会不同吗?如果我最后没有交这篇论文,或者迟交了这篇论文,我的成绩又会是怎样呢,会不会就直接给挂掉了?
\x05Why do I say this in front of a certain extent,it affected my outlook on life,because I thought my life had some "little things",I also believe that everyone can speak their important a "little things",in fact I often struggle with the small things like:If I go ten minutes late,and today will be different?I did not catch this tour if the subway,I would encounter anything at all?If I have not seen the film,what have my life change?If I do not inadvertently open the users of the critics,my thesis topic will be different?If I did not pay the final paper or a paper late,what I would do the results will not directly to hang?
\x05当然生命中是没有这么多如果的,世界上也没有后悔药卖,我们能做的也只能是做好自己生命中的每一件小事,礼貌对待我们身边的每一个人,节约时间,因为那就是善待我们自己的生命;努力工作,因为那会给我们带来我们想要的生活.
Of course life is not so much if the world did not regret selling drugs,we could all do a good job of their own life every little thing,courteous to everyone around us,to save time because it is to treat our own lives; hard work,because that will give us the life we want.
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Why did I say it also influenced my Outlook on life to a certain extent before ,I thought of some "little things" in my life .I believe that everyone will have an important "little things" as well.to be honest,I often be lost into thinking about these "little things".for example,if I had gone out ten minutes late,will today be different?If I hadn't catch on the subway,what would I meet?If I hadn't seen the film,how my outlook would have changed?If I hadn't been accidentally opened the net friend of critics,wether my paper topic would be different?If I finally did not hand in this paper,or late this paper,how would my grades be?And wether be directly not pass?
Of course there is not so much" if "in life ,there is no such a shop in the world that sells regret drugs.What we can do is doing every "little things" well in our life ,Treat courtesy of the side of every person,saving time.Because it is to treat our own lives.hard work,because that will gives us the lives we want.
有错的望见谅.
 
 
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