修改下这段英文语法The importance of the research is that the characte

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The importance of the research is that the characteristics of china advertising wih media.With a long history ,the cultue of china not only has come down traditional virtues ,but also has come down a conservative ideas.And there are 9 hundred million farmer live in china.It's coming into being a advertisement environment with blindly or mechanically.why there are a lot of humour and cleverly advertising in the west?Becouse of the open-minded culture.It effect of a big difference between the chinese and foreign commercial advertisements.
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重点是中国媒体广告的特点.伴随着悠久的历史,中国不禁传承了传统美德,同样传承了保守的思想,另外中国有9亿的农民.这就形成了我国广告环境的盲目或者机械化.为什么西方有那么多的幽默和巧妙的广告?因为开放的文化.它影响了中国和外国之间巨大的广告文化差异.

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The key point(关键；要点.importance是重要性,两者有点细微的差别) of the research is that the characteristics of Chinese(大写,另外此处应该用形容词) media of advertising（广告媒体）.Developing with（随着...的发展） a long history ,the cultue of china has not only handed down(传递给后世) traditional virtues ,but also a conservative ideas（不用再重复了）.There(and是用来连接句子的,最好别再一句话的开头用) are nine hundred million farmers（复数） live in china.It comes（不需要进行时） into being an（不是a） advertisement environment of blindness and mechanization(with 后面怎么能单独加副词呢?).Why are there（疑问句的语序） a lot of humour and perfect(巧妙的,极好的) advertisement（广告） in the west counties（加个countries比较好）?It is because of the open-minded culture.(because of 不能独立引导句子)It affects（effect是名词而非动词） Chinese advertising and brings about a huge(巨大的,比用big好一些) difference between the Chinese（大写） and foreign culture（文化） of advertisements.
其实还有很多可改之处,不过是要换换语序加一些连词,增加句子的复杂程度的,不知道你需不需要,所以就没改,希望帮得到你.

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