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Dear Li Ming,
I'm excited about hearing from you.IS everything OK?
I know what worries you most recently is whether to stay abroad or come back after graduating.In my opinion,it's better for you to come back.Everyone is here,your friends,parents and most relative.Back to China,it'll be more convenient for you to look after your parents and we can also see you often.The care of the relative and the help of friends will give you much more love.These will help you make prograss on your work.
I hope my advice will help you and I'll support you forever.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Li Ming,
I'm excited about hearing from you.IS everything OK?
I know what worries you most recently is whether to stay abroad or come back after graduating.In my opinion,it's better for you to come back.Everyone is here,your friends,parents and most relative.Back to China,it'll be more convenient for you to look after your parents and we can also see you often.The care of the relative and the help of friends will give you much more love.These will help you make prograss on your work.
I hope my advice will help you and I'll support you forever.
Yours,
Li Hua
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