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Hi, my name is , I am a 15 year old girl. I was a high school student in Linyi four. I like listening to music, especially in a bad mood, the music always makes me forget their troubles. As an ideal, indeed, I have not had very clear objectives, 我还有什么缺少的么,字数太少,希望老师帮我找出不足,谢谢老师
1个回答 分类:英语 2014-09-07

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解题思路: 1 你还可以加入开场白。如: 1). It's a pleasure for me to be here in front of you to present myself. 2). I'm happy to be here today to introduce myself. 2 可以讲一下你的性格,如outgoing,开朗的;easygoing随和的;quiet文静的等 3可以加入你的喜爱的偶像,电影,书等。 4 加入关于学习的一些相关内容。如,我希望可以提高我的英语。I am not doing well in my English and I hope it can be improved soon. 5还可以讲下你以后想做什么工作等。如,My dream job is to be a teacher.(后面讲理由)
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Hi, my name is , I am a 15 year old girl. I was (曾经是高中学生?是不是时态错了)a high school student in Linyi Four. I like listening to music, especially when I am in a bad mood.(句号)The music always makes me forget the troubles. As for ideal universty(至于理想大学), indeed, I have not had very clear objectives.
 
 
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