谁能帮我改下这篇英语改错

我帮你改了改,你看看吧：(PS:我这是照你写的改的,如果这是个改错题,那就另当别论了.)
Having good manners is very important when you visit an English family.As we know,if you are invited to go to an English friend's house for dinner,you should pay attention to the follwing tips.First,you'd better to bring a small gift such as a bunch of flowers or a bottle of wine for your host or hostess.Second,arrive on time.Don't be too late or too early.Third,during dinner,be sure to compliment your host or hostess during the meals.Fourth,don't look around others' rooms of the house unless you're invited to have a look.Finally,remember to thank your host or hostess for the dinner after you leave. Hope everying goes well
要是这是个改错题,你就照着这个适当改改吧.祝学习愉快
再问： 不好意思 这就是道改错题
再答： 好吧，那就是第一行：1.are--is 2.a Englishi--an English 第二行：3.pay attention for--.....to 第三行：4.you'd better to bring去掉to 第四行：5.arrived--arrive 6.Don't too late--Don't be too late 第五行：7.on the meals-on the meal 8.the other room--the other's room 第六行：9.remeber to thanking--...to thanl 第七行：10. goes good--goes well