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The recent years has witnessed a heated discussion over education .Some people take the view that it is justified for teanger to learn skills to earn money because that play a vital role in life.From my perspective this point of view can hold water.first of all,learning the skills of manage money allowed student facilitate practical abilities ,expand one's vision elevate hand-on capabilities and developing their creative wealth mind and survive ability.There for them to withstand the gestation period pave the way for rose future.
The recent years has witnessed a heated discussion over education .Some people take the view that it is justified for teanger to learn skills to earn money because that play a vital role in life.From my perspective this point of view can hold water.first of all,learning the skills of manage money allowed student facilitate practical abilities ,expand one's vision elevate hand-on capabilities and developing their creative wealth mind and survive ability.There for them to withstand the gestation period pave the way for rose future.
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