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A mother's love is like a circle,it has no begging and ending,
no stronger bond on earth.i think it’s really true for my mother.
Mother loves me in every aspect of my life.For example,since the school where l study is far away from my home,I have to get up very early every morning .I find breakfast ready on the table.Seeing the hot meal I am too moved to say a word.As a matter of fact,Mother does not ask me to thank her in words.also ,mother’s job is very busy,but she look after me carefully.Her eyes with the love-light is shining everytime.she gives me the security of a happy home,i feel I am very happiness.
Our mothers love us,they use their lives bringing us up.let’s be thankful to our mothers for they love whit a higher love.
A mother's love is like a circle,it has no begging and ending,
no stronger bond on earth.i think it’s really true for my mother.
Mother loves me in every aspect of my life.For example,since the school where l study is far away from my home,I have to get up very early every morning .I find breakfast ready on the table.Seeing the hot meal I am too moved to say a word.As a matter of fact,Mother does not ask me to thank her in words.also ,mother’s job is very busy,but she look after me carefully.Her eyes with the love-light is shining everytime.she gives me the security of a happy home,i feel I am very happiness.
Our mothers love us,they use their lives bringing us up.let’s be thankful to our mothers for they love whit a higher love.
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