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Some people claim that the increasingly frequent business and cutural communications are positive.Whereas others hold a different opinion.Discuss.
In this age of change,the human society is progressing rapidly on various front.Yet at the same time,heated dispute has been going on about whether we should face to increasingly frequent business and cutural communications.Someone believe it will cause positive effect.But some others assert different opinion.Speaking for myself,I support former opinion.
Firstly,frequent business will stimulate economic increase quickly,that will make individuals' life fantastic.People around the world today are able to enjoy different products and service.For instance,it is due to the international communication in business,people can buy such high quality products from different countries.So,it is obvious that communication contribute human beings.
Moreover,cultural communication also bring us many benefits to our lives.It was virtually incredible to imagine an international family several decades ago,but today on account of rapid development of communications.It is simple see that some international family appear.On the other hand,international family will help their children recognise different culture,it is good for children to broaden their horizens.
Last but not least,the communication are actually a processof globalization.This is trend of sustainable development with communications.People become brothers and sisters rather than enemies.With communications,there wiill be peace rather than war.
To conclude,regarding as all the reasons above.I believe even the communication have some negative influences.But the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.Therefore,the communication should be advocated and encouraged as much as we can.
Some people claim that the increasingly frequent business and cutural communications are positive.Whereas others hold a different opinion.Discuss.
In this age of change,the human society is progressing rapidly on various front.Yet at the same time,heated dispute has been going on about whether we should face to increasingly frequent business and cutural communications.Someone believe it will cause positive effect.But some others assert different opinion.Speaking for myself,I support former opinion.
Firstly,frequent business will stimulate economic increase quickly,that will make individuals' life fantastic.People around the world today are able to enjoy different products and service.For instance,it is due to the international communication in business,people can buy such high quality products from different countries.So,it is obvious that communication contribute human beings.
Moreover,cultural communication also bring us many benefits to our lives.It was virtually incredible to imagine an international family several decades ago,but today on account of rapid development of communications.It is simple see that some international family appear.On the other hand,international family will help their children recognise different culture,it is good for children to broaden their horizens.
Last but not least,the communication are actually a processof globalization.This is trend of sustainable development with communications.People become brothers and sisters rather than enemies.With communications,there wiill be peace rather than war.
To conclude,regarding as all the reasons above.I believe even the communication have some negative influences.But the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.Therefore,the communication should be advocated and encouraged as much as we can.
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