麻烦帮我改一改这篇英语作文(错误或不当的地方)

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麻烦帮我改一改这篇英语作文(错误或不当的地方)
Many people like driving car because they all think that the car is fast and it can only spend a few time going any where,so many people seldon ride bike.But cycling is more useful than drive car.For example,cycling doesn't cause air pollution and it doesn't have many traffic acciident ,what'more,cycling is a good exercise and it's good for our health.I hope people can ride bike often instead of drive car.
作文要求:现在有汽车的人越来越多了,骑自行车的人越来越少了,你能否简单阐述一下骑自行车的好处,进而宣传一下让更多的人骑自行车.
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Many people like driving car because they all think that the car is fast and it just spend only (a)去掉 few time going any where(anywhere),so many people seldon (seldom)ride bike.But cycling is more useful than drive(driving) car.For example,cycling doesn't cause air pollution and it doesn't have many traffic acciident ,what'more,cycling is a good exercise and it's good for our health.I hope people can ride bike more often instead of drive(driving) car.
你仔细对照一下,
再问: .I hope people can ride bike more often instead of drive(driving) car. 这里 要加more吗?
再答: 改这个吧,如果你想加more,这样会好些more often than drive car.
 
 
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