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Good Faith
We can see from the drawing that the apple with a worm inside has been dealed with the wormhole by seller .The businessman covered the wormhole with a logo,sothat it seems difficult to the point of impossibility for buyers to find that the apples are not as great as they look like.
This cartoon is a perfect reflection of the issue of good faith.There are so many people who have lost their good faiths,that the scene depicted in the picture above has been a very common sight in modern society.The lackness of good faith not only causes the social problem of food and health,but also results in many other fields being lack of good faiths.It is such a horrible matter that the society we exist in would change into a place where there is no more good faith.Therefore,to work out problem that society is in great need of good faith should be placed on a high value.
However,the solving methods are very complexing and thus can't be simply considered the problems that may just be solved by carrying out a series of laws. To begin with,a good mood of society is the key point to that.And what is the most efficient way is the completely social education among children,young adults and elderly people.Moreover,make sure that good faith can spread widely through medium as often as possible.Finnally,building up a society in good faith is not a dream any more.
这是一个看图作文,图中是一个有虫子洞的苹果,然后洞被卖家给盖住了.让你1、先描述这个图片,2、说清图片所反映的现实问题,3、谈谈解决办法. 我这里以诚信为话题 展开议论.
Good Faith
We can see from the drawing that the apple with a worm inside has been dealed with the wormhole by seller .The businessman covered the wormhole with a logo,sothat it seems difficult to the point of impossibility for buyers to find that the apples are not as great as they look like.
This cartoon is a perfect reflection of the issue of good faith.There are so many people who have lost their good faiths,that the scene depicted in the picture above has been a very common sight in modern society.The lackness of good faith not only causes the social problem of food and health,but also results in many other fields being lack of good faiths.It is such a horrible matter that the society we exist in would change into a place where there is no more good faith.Therefore,to work out problem that society is in great need of good faith should be placed on a high value.
However,the solving methods are very complexing and thus can't be simply considered the problems that may just be solved by carrying out a series of laws. To begin with,a good mood of society is the key point to that.And what is the most efficient way is the completely social education among children,young adults and elderly people.Moreover,make sure that good faith can spread widely through medium as often as possible.Finnally,building up a society in good faith is not a dream any more.
这是一个看图作文,图中是一个有虫子洞的苹果,然后洞被卖家给盖住了.让你1、先描述这个图片,2、说清图片所反映的现实问题,3、谈谈解决办法. 我这里以诚信为话题 展开议论.
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