基本符合您的要求：
An Unforgettable Experience
I like traveling very much.My trip to XiAn is really unforgettable.Before I went there,I always wanted to see Bin Ma Yong,so I chose to go there.
I went to there by train with my parents and I had breakfast in the hotel.Then we went there by bus.When I got off the bus,I was very excited.I saw a lot of false man whose hand with all kinds of things.
I took many pictures.Finally we went back the hotel in the afternoon.
Though I was very tired,I felt very happy.I dwill never forget it for ever.
再问： 西安是"Xi'an"而不是"XiAn"，兵马俑是"soldier and horse figures"而不是"Bin Ma Yong"，最后一行的"dwill"应该是"will"吧！不过还是谢谢你，如果考试过了的话，最佳答案就是你！真的很谢谢你！
