这句话用英语怎么讲?上帝会帮助那些朝自身目标而努力奋斗的人!动词help到底要不要加s呢？

God help those who help themselves.这句话的意识是“自助者天助之”,用在这里也可以.
你的句子字面翻译过来的话是:God will help those who are determined to achieve their goals.
不用加s,就如God bless me 上帝保佑我 一样,习惯用法,记住就好!