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希望老师能帮我看看有什么语法错误没有。我写完之后总是觉得结尾空空的没结好...希望老师能提出好的修改建议。
Hello everyone, I’m very happy to be in the same class with you,My Chinese name is WangRuXuan and My English name is Joanna.
I’ m interesting in all school subject. But My favorite subject is
Chemistry. Because do experiments is really exciting! In my spare time ,I like to read novels.I think reading could enlarge my knowledge.In addition to reading,I also like to listen to music and singing .I also enjoy play the drum. My friends say that a girl playing the drums are really cool.I have to say ,I agree with them!
To tell the truth, my English is not very good. But I have confidence, in the next three years I will be working harder, I believe that the future I can do it better.
Hello everyone, I’m very happy to be in the same class with you,My Chinese name is WangRuXuan and My English name is Joanna.
I’ m interesting in all school subject. But My favorite subject is
Chemistry. Because do experiments is really exciting! In my spare time ,I like to read novels.I think reading could enlarge my knowledge.In addition to reading,I also like to listen to music and singing .I also enjoy play the drum. My friends say that a girl playing the drums are really cool.I have to say ,I agree with them!
To tell the truth, my English is not very good. But I have confidence, in the next three years I will be working harder, I believe that the future I can do it better.
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