帮忙看看有没有语法错误

有三处语法错误
.a licensed architect,i will .
这里不能加逗号.这里的句意是连贯的,没有插入语存在,不加逗号.反过来考虑你会更清楚：I will need to have completed the master course,to be eligible to become a licensed architect.这里的逗号显然不应该有.
.I will need to .
因为你前文用的是found out过去时,这里应该是 I would need to
.need to have completed .
to have completed是不对的.没有need to have + pp.的用法,改为 need to complete
除此之外,改进建议：
I would need to 直接用 needed to代替,意义不变.
to be eligible改为to be qualified更合适,因为qualify直接指出,有一个衡量标准
found out在这里是对的,found也是对的.