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My friend
Everyone has friends.I have fiends,too.One of my friend is great.Her name is Lily.She is a thirteen-year-old girl who can let me feel warm when I am sad.She is kind,generous and friendly.She often helps the dogs and cats which are losing their ways to home.We have the same hobby.Both of us like swimming and playing the piano.She is good at swimming.We often swim together.It is a enjoyful time to play with her.She is my good friend!
顺便看看我能得多少分?明天期末考试!
My friend
Everyone has friends.I have fiends,too.One of my friend is great.Her name is Lily.She is a thirteen-year-old girl who can let me feel warm when I am sad.She is kind,generous and friendly.She often helps the dogs and cats which are losing their ways to home.We have the same hobby.Both of us like swimming and playing the piano.She is good at swimming.We often swim together.It is a enjoyful time to play with her.She is my good friend!
顺便看看我能得多少分?明天期末考试!
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