英语翻译Although the fact likes what you said but we cannot ingo

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英语翻译
Although the fact likes what you said but we cannot ingore this reason at the same time.
It is our first time to design this kind of colorbox for M11,
our other customers have no requirment like this before,so the LNK offered to u in early time is just for white and separated box.
The colorbox has been changed and of course,the carton has to be modified accordingly now.
Bec of the coming delivery date and we have finished the packing now,so we would like to know if we can ship this order with LNK of 6pcs/carton?
If you insist on keeping the LNK of 4pcs/carton,could we change the LNK from next order?
Looking forward your early reply.
1个回答 分类:英语 2014-11-01

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囧,第一句就出了2处硬性错误和两处不通顺:
1.Although/but英语中直选其一.
2.like在这句里应该是像的意思而非喜欢,所以缺谓语成分.
3.this reason应该是指代相邻前文的原因,但是前文看不到任何表原因成分.
4.At the same time一般作为短句衔接并列的下文,后接逗号;
此处已与Although/but转折关系相冲突.
整句应该改成,如:Although the fact looks like what you said,we can't afford to ingore the reason of somewhat.
 
 
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