英文歌词听写校正hands in heaven以下是我听写的部分,有部分听不出来XD,可能还有错别字,希望高手帮下啦、、

发现有错误!吃个早餐再来回答!
There were people in my life who left great memorys
I can smell the cookies baking that grandam made with me
i can hear the grandpa's stories that he tolds you for live (后面不清)
I was just a young child sitting on his knee
they are holding hands in heaven
With joyful tears in their eyes
they're holding hands in heaver
For the love ones left behind
I can still fell mama arms ,gently holding me
pretender touch her loving smile and joyful melody
Dady came home tire from work at end of his own day
Shotly have a supper he take me out to play
they are holding hands in heaven
With joyful tears in their eyes
they're holding hands in heaver
For the love ones left behind
It's hard to say goodbye to my friends and family
they are memorys of a lifetime cherished but i can see
i know i am in their presence when i need you down to pray ()
just like Jesus promise i'll see them off sunday
They are holding hands in heaven
With joyful tears in their eyes
they're holding hands in heaver
For the love ones left behind
改完啦!仔细看看,有挺多地方不一样的
你应该高中生吧?