问题描述：
请问这篇短文能得多少分?谢谢!
【要求】
How should Parents Help Children to Be independent?
1、 目前不少父母为孩子包办一切 2、 为了孩子独立,父母应该……
【评分标准】
28分—— 切题.表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好.基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错.
22分—— 切题.表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误.（单复数,冠词,拼写,大小写）
16分 —— 基本切题.有些地方表达思想不够清楚, 文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误.（时态混乱,句子成分搭配不当）
10分 —— 基本切题.表达思想不清楚,连贯性差.有较多的严重语言错误
【答卷】
Some parents,in the presence【脑子一犯浑把present写成名词了】, always help their children to deal with all their trouble ,Which mainly shows in their life and other side,Obviously,It is hard to develop children‘s ability of independence,In other words, There is no need for parent to do so,On the contract.
Parents should try their’s best to make their children to be independent,In the first place,Parents had better consciously trained their children to settle their trouble by self,If their children have met some trouble hard to settle by self,Then,Parents could properly assist thier childer.What is more,Parents should tell children how to deal with the trouble than to directly help them,By doing which can their children easily settle their trouble in their future and now.
满分30.
28分—— 切题。表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错。
22分—— 切题。表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。（单复数，冠词，拼写，大小写）
16分 —— 基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚, 文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误。（时态混乱，句子成分搭配不当）
10分 —— 基本切题。表达思想不清楚,连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误
【要求】
How should Parents Help Children to Be independent?
1、 目前不少父母为孩子包办一切 2、 为了孩子独立,父母应该……
【评分标准】
28分—— 切题.表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好.基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错.
22分—— 切题.表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误.（单复数,冠词,拼写,大小写）
16分 —— 基本切题.有些地方表达思想不够清楚, 文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误.（时态混乱,句子成分搭配不当）
10分 —— 基本切题.表达思想不清楚,连贯性差.有较多的严重语言错误
【答卷】
Some parents,in the presence【脑子一犯浑把present写成名词了】, always help their children to deal with all their trouble ,Which mainly shows in their life and other side,Obviously,It is hard to develop children‘s ability of independence,In other words, There is no need for parent to do so,On the contract.
Parents should try their’s best to make their children to be independent,In the first place,Parents had better consciously trained their children to settle their trouble by self,If their children have met some trouble hard to settle by self,Then,Parents could properly assist thier childer.What is more,Parents should tell children how to deal with the trouble than to directly help them,By doing which can their children easily settle their trouble in their future and now.
满分30.
28分—— 切题。表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错。
22分—— 切题。表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。（单复数，冠词，拼写，大小写）
16分 —— 基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚, 文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误。（时态混乱，句子成分搭配不当）
10分 —— 基本切题。表达思想不清楚,连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误
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