问题描述：
帮我修改一下我自己写的英语演讲稿
英语演讲稿
ladies and gentleman:
today I want to share with you something about my growing pains.
After this Spring Festival,I’m already 18 years old and I think I’m a grown-up now.last time I took part in this competition I recite a famous speech but this time I’m showing you my own experience,for a grown-up should be brave enough to show herself and rely on herself
There is a song called.lots of children hate to grow up because we have to face so much reality.take me for example,about 2 years ago I went to a new school where I have to separate from all of my old friends.it was so lonely for me for I have no new friends,every one is busy with their studies.once on a P.E lesson ,the teacher asked us to make a up-side-down under our partner’s help because it’s dangerous.but when I made it the people supposed to help me didn’t protect me,so I got hurt.it was so serious that I went to almost every big hospital in this city but it couldn’t be cured.what’s more they didn’t even say sorry nor did they show any care.from then on I just couldn’t stop thinking how selfish they are.
Another thing that shock me is that our English teacher suddenly died of lung cancer last year.it’s the first time I feel that death is so close to us an life is so vulnerable I was afraid that I’ll get old or dead before I have realized my dream.
If you think I’m pessimistic you are wrong,I will never ever give up.
Although the society may be dark and life may be short,we should find the positive reason to continue for light is always accompanied by dark and life is meaningful because it’s limited.
Thank you for listening.
请指出语法错误(动词结构之类的)或更好的建议(比如内容方面的)
这是我头一次写稿,语句是否太简单呢?(反正过几天就得比赛)
推荐些好的演讲稿的网站吧
哪有 pains in growing 的说法啊 不是都是growing pains
我们学校的人的确很没人性啊
现实本来就是黑暗的,连说说都受限制
要不我还是写点别的吧
英语演讲稿
ladies and gentleman:
today I want to share with you something about my growing pains.
After this Spring Festival,I’m already 18 years old and I think I’m a grown-up now.last time I took part in this competition I recite a famous speech but this time I’m showing you my own experience,for a grown-up should be brave enough to show herself and rely on herself
There is a song called.lots of children hate to grow up because we have to face so much reality.take me for example,about 2 years ago I went to a new school where I have to separate from all of my old friends.it was so lonely for me for I have no new friends,every one is busy with their studies.once on a P.E lesson ,the teacher asked us to make a up-side-down under our partner’s help because it’s dangerous.but when I made it the people supposed to help me didn’t protect me,so I got hurt.it was so serious that I went to almost every big hospital in this city but it couldn’t be cured.what’s more they didn’t even say sorry nor did they show any care.from then on I just couldn’t stop thinking how selfish they are.
Another thing that shock me is that our English teacher suddenly died of lung cancer last year.it’s the first time I feel that death is so close to us an life is so vulnerable I was afraid that I’ll get old or dead before I have realized my dream.
If you think I’m pessimistic you are wrong,I will never ever give up.
Although the society may be dark and life may be short,we should find the positive reason to continue for light is always accompanied by dark and life is meaningful because it’s limited.
Thank you for listening.
请指出语法错误(动词结构之类的)或更好的建议(比如内容方面的)
这是我头一次写稿,语句是否太简单呢?(反正过几天就得比赛)
推荐些好的演讲稿的网站吧
哪有 pains in growing 的说法啊 不是都是growing pains
我们学校的人的确很没人性啊
现实本来就是黑暗的,连说说都受限制
要不我还是写点别的吧
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